This is a poem I wrote recently when I wanted to take a break from struggling with my first novel. It will be published soon in the 16th edition of Dubai Poetics out by April end. Do let me know your thoughts. 🙂

‘My poems are born of you,’
the river whispered to the mountains.
As the wind carried the river’s gentle sighs,
high up to the land of clouds and veils
nestled in the skies,
the mountains trembled.
It had felt the young love of his beloved
as she skipped, laughed and tripped along with him.
Majestic he had stood, watching her antics,
she had murmured her delight and thundered in pleasure.
But… his silence engorged her senses.
Nothing else could she bear.
Yet, she wanted, just for once, to be held
and loved with words she could hear.
Flowing away, with time, she left her mountain behind.
Meandering amidst valleys, she heard
voices other than her lover’s silence.
Thrilled, she gurgled with delight and rushed on.
She was loved, adored, worshipped, and more.
Yet, greater as her name grew,
farther as her fame spread.
she missed the silent communion
that had created her.
She wished she could turn her waves around
force the currents back to the source.
Sometimes she raged.
Sometimes she sluggishly moved on.
Did he hear her cries and sighs?
Did her love know that she was done with life?
She moved on… tired and dirty,
loved and worshipped.
Stillness replacing energy.
And then with her baggage of offerings,
bodies, debris, and silt,
she gave up the last of her freshness –
her very essence –
to the vast blue
that matched her beloved
in hue.
As the clouds burst above him,
drenching him with her love,
he realized that she had given up her life
to once again fall in his arms and lie.
It is beautiful, Binu.
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Thank you so very much Sunith.
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Most welcome
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It’s beautiful. The river sings with her soul! Well written Binu.
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Thank you Pa 🙂
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Beautiful lines binu….
All the best for your novel…. Awaiting to read… 👍👍👍
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Thanks Chechi :). Will definitely keep you posted.
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Beautiful Binu. Fresh, cool, sweet, effortlessly flowing… pretty much like your river. Keep writing. Keep publishing.
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Thanks Sonali 😁.
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Simply superb Bins…Keep it up.
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Thanks Goutam. I will keep trying to 🙂
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Its beautiful Binu ,, a song in your heart ❤
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Thanks a lot Polika :). A song in all our hearts if I remember the ride back correctly :).
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